Tag: Writing

This term for writing we have been learning how to write complex sentences. Everyday we write a sentence with a specific word. Today our words were swayed, shimmed and jive, I chose swayed.

Here is my sentence:

I watched as the palm trees swayed gently in the breeze and the seagulls ducked and dived in and out of the ocean as the old lonely fisherman sat on the wharf humming a sea shanty.

What could I add to make it better?

Let me know in the comments 😄

This week in room 1 we have been working on describing characters for writing we could choose a character from a book we were writing or describe old us. I chose to describe a character from a book I have been writing I got the idea for the book when reading an awesome series called Dragon Defenders the series is very exciting and made my heart pound. Here is my description about the male dragon in the series called Elton

Character Description

I loved writing this because I like writing books about dragons,

What do you like writing about?

Let me know in the comments,

Bye 👋

This week we have been learning about describing, describing is putting an image in your readers mind, we had to describe some pictures,

here are mine

I chose these because I liked the idea of having colourful water,

What would you describe?

Let me know what you think in the comments?

Bye!!

Kia Ora

For the last two weeks we have been learning about persuasive writing

One of our tasks was to make your own advertisement for a toy.

I loved making up my toy.

It was hard recording.

Here it is.

Would you buy my toy?