This week we had two write about our own made up mythical creatures. Mine is called a Verdanox.
The Verdanox has a green deer like body but it moves without disturbing the grass under its powerful hooves.It’s as big as a small hill and its eyes are hollow like skulls and it has powerful hind legs and antlers as sharp as the Sword of King Arthur.
It only appears once on the longest night of the year to fight its enemy the Fuil-dhubh (Bloodhound in Scottish Gaelic) at the ancient site Drumelzier where the wizard Merlin was said to be buried. The Verdanox is bound by an oath to protect the balance of life and death.
It is said that it was once a guardian spirit, created from the heart of the earth itself shaped by the forces of nature and magic. When it enters our world its auror is so powerful it sends every living creature into a deep sleep.
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